feeling like...?

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i'm tired of faking
and trying to smile
when all i really want
is to die
i hate that i'm too weak
to leave this behind
when i think of
the people i owe
i wake up every morning
and slowly decay as the time
ticks down to midnight
and then when i sleep
it begins all again
but still i awake with no smile.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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Comments

  • Jeremy1012Jeremy1012 Posts: 7,170
    Dont do it.
    "I remember one night at Muzdalifa with nothing but the sky overhead, I lay awake amid sleeping Muslim brothers and I learned that pilgrims from every land — every colour, and class, and rank; high officials and the beggar alike — all snored in the same language"
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    heres to hope that you smile because i think your writing is good here
    another one id wish i could write
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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