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final lap

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
should i lie
when he asks
and say
everything's alright
or should i
tell him
exactly what's wrong
should i live
in denial
and shine a fake smile
when it takes
all of my energy
just to breathe
i don't know
what to do
my lungs fill
with tar
my arrow shot
way off the mark
i want to see colours
and smell pretty flowers
but i don't know
how much longer
i can last.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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Comments

  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    cate-- you may need a break to chill
    Be good to yourself and
    take care of you.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    jamjam wrote:
    cate-- you may need a break to chill
    Be good to yourself and
    take care of you.

    a break from what - life?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    [B/]Be good to yourself and
    take care of you. good advice.
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    damn no edit button I'm sure you realise that was supposed to be in bold.^^^^
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    {{{cate}}}

    I'm not sure what's better. I've tried both. Holding in the way I feel and letting it show.

    In the whole wrestling match between two people, I'm not sure which is better. :(
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    catefrances wrote:
    a break from what - life?



    yeah, take a break from life---
    have a KitKat :D
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