...and counting.

catefrances

bind my heart in sticky tape
so it won't fall apart
wrap my body in cellophane
and tie it with a bow
i just don't know
how long i'll last
or if i can even breathe
but something tells me
there's nowhere else
that i'd rather be
i think you broke me
it feels that way
but somehow
i'm still here
despite your concerns
i'd maybe do some harm
and that i'd do what i had to do
you turned your back
you walked away
and left me standing here
i'd be lying if i said
i understood
cause right now things aren't clear
i want to move
but my feet are stuck
and as heavy as concrete boots
you told me things
i'll take to my grave
and that's the only thing
i know for sure.

lucylespian

I like this, I think it ia the best effort of yours I have read, I'll go back and read some more, might even get keen enough to have a go myself.
Very inspirational !!