a brief and perhaps wine soaked thought

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i look around
but you're not here
i wonder what you're doing
and who you're doing it with
i know that i shouldn't
but i can't help myself
i miss you
and i want you
and i need you around.
i haven't been myself lately
but then again...
maybe i have
i know you can't give it all
and i'll take what i can get
i want you
and i need you
just don't want to something that i'll regret.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    i look around
    but you're not here
    i wonder what you're doing
    and who you're doing it with
    i know that i shouldn't
    but i can't help myself
    i miss you
    and i want you
    and i need you around.
    i haven't been myself lately
    but then again...
    maybe i have
    i know you can't give it all
    and i'll take what i can get
    i want you
    and i need you
    just don't want to do something that i'll regret.


    have we not earned the right to edit?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    this one made me cry a little

    That's sooo friggin' beautiful

    In vino veritas :)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    Jamal wrote:
    this one made me cry a little

    That's sooo friggin' beautiful

    In vino veritas :)

    thank you kindly. :)
    oh indeed jamal. i always speak the truth when i'm imbibing the red wine. :D
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    By the way
    I hope you get sane soon

    but I want to read more first :)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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