breezy #2

catefrances

with your hand in mine we'll stare into the sun
we'll bury our toes beneath the sand
face east and take whatever comes
the rising day, the cold north wind
that shakes the leaves off dancing trees
your breath be mine
our souls will cleave
two hearts shall beat as one
and every time you say my name
i'll return yours with intent as pure as driven snow
when late afternoon the shadows come
what is given can not be undone

catefrances

with your hand in mine we'll stare into the sun
we'll bury our toes beneath the sand
face east and take whatever comes
the rising day, the cold north wind
that shakes the leaves off dancing trees
your breath be mine
our souls will cleave
two hearts shall beat as one
and every time you say my name
i'll return yours with intent as pure as driven snow
when late afternoon the shadows come
what is given can not will not shall not ever be undone

walden freeman

This is very honest and very idealistic and very beautiful.

The flow was very nice and I really enjoyed reading it.