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catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
she feels discarded, disavowed
like yesterday's newspaper
she doesn't know
what the fuck happened
an innocent comment
and all hell broke loose
he attacked her with such venom
she could feel the bitemark on her skin
nothing she said seemed to make a difference
he just wouldn't listen
or was unable to
threats were thrown
and recieved in kind
stupid words and
the worst timing
she needs a break
and so does he.
she can be strong for him
but she can't withstand an assault like that
she shouldn't have to
and she won't
not for him
not for anyone
no words left for her to say
she'll leave him be
and write off what turned
out to be an extremly bad day.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    Only a fool,
    would ever be so stupid,
    but maybe he didn't realize what he had done;

    No one could be that dumb.
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • bookmusebookmuse Posts: 277
    Brainofdz wrote:
    Only a fool,
    would ever be so stupid,
    but maybe he didn't realize what he had done;

    No one could be that dumb.


    I disagree...i've known a couple.

    Liked the poem
    "Speak your mind even if your voice shakes" ~ M Kuhn
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    I see pride
    I see power
    I see the scars
    I taste the blood
    Her tears are warm, but her blood turned cold...


    Very nice Cate
    And don't you take no crap from no-one ;)
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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