stripped clean

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you strip me clean
i need you whole
everything you give is
like a fresh breath of air
you're inside my skin
my heart my being
you're almost all i need to live

what you're not is
the dark so blind
that clings so tight
and tries to bind
me to my past
with no recourse
i shed my skin
expose my bones
you strip me clean
and keep me whole.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    well done..that is one great piece of writing..you rock..
    reading it again..thank you for sharing this..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    thanks chad.
    i wrote this for someone special, who's close to my heart. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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