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ever felt so tired you could sleep forever?

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited July 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i disconnect my mind from my body
and let the flow take me away
i can feel the warmth surround me
but i don't like what i’m becoming
i thought i needed you
but i don’t
i thought i wanted you
but i…..
well i can’t lie about that
so i’ll say nothing
i’ll delude myself into happiness
to forget you even existed
i figure that’s what it will take
you’ll be off the hook
you can do whatever it is
you think you need to do
i'll be free from blame
and you’ll be free from nothing
i can’t stand to be ignored
but i can’t be bothered to react
if you wanted it
then you’d take it
so i guess i have my answer
you’ll be free from blame
and i’ll be free from…..
as i disconnect my body
and dull my mind with poison
i separate from myself
and wish for something more
so many times i cried out
into a night too deaf to care
ignore my desire
what i know is out there
hiding in my stupidity
foolishness eats insides out
are you free from blame?
cause i am free from...
...nothing
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • hrd2imgnhrd2imgn Southwest Burbs of Chicago Posts: 4,898
    yeah i know that feeling, problem is whenever I feel that way I can never fall asleep!
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    hrd2imgn wrote:
    yeah i know that feeling, problem is whenever I feel that way I can never fall asleep!

    i think maybe we're talking about different kinds of sleep.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • JeanieJeanie Posts: 9,446
    Yes catiefractious, right now! :o

    But that's not what you are meaning I realize. Another awesome effort my dear. :)
    NOPE!!!

    *~You're IT Bert!~*

    Hold on to the thread
    The currents will shift
  • reeferchiefreeferchief Posts: 3,569
    Why when we have so much
    do we always crave for more?
    there is some things in life so precious
    that make others not worth dying for
    take to heart all those good things in life
    and let you're friends share the burden.
    Can not be arsed with life no more.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    reeferchief wrote:
    Why when we have so much
    do we always crave for more?
    there is some things in life so precious
    that make others not worth dying for
    take to heart all those good things in life
    and let you're friends share the burden.


    how ironic that the pathetic misanthrope is so desperately alone and can't hold what she craves the most.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    catefrances wrote:
    how ironic that the pathetic misanthrope is so desperately alone and can't hold what she craves the most.

    Chris Cornells' decapitated head?

    hey if you need someone to chat to then PM reeferchief as he's a lot nicer than me ;)
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    dunkman wrote:
    Chris Cornells' decapitated head?

    hey if you need someone to chat to then PM reeferchief as he's a lot nicer than me ;)

    i am well aware of how nice reefer is. thanks dunk.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    catefrances wrote:
    i am well aware of how nice reefer is. thanks dunk.

    really? i'd heard that he smacks paraplegics in the face.... how wrong could i be?
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    dunkman wrote:
    really? i'd heard that he smacks paraplegics in the face.... how wrong could i be?

    yes really. and i don't know dunk, how wrong can you be?
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    catefrances wrote:
    yes really. and i don't know dunk, how wrong can you be?

    as wrong as trying to suggest to my missus that we introduce a female third party into the bedroom along with some love beads and an emollient of her choosing?

    whats wrong with you? cant you chat to someone?
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    dunkman wrote:

    whats wrong with you? cant you chat to someone?

    what the fuck is wrong with you?

    sometimes talking's not enough dunk.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • dunkmandunkman Posts: 19,646
    catefrances wrote:
    what the fuck is wrong with you?

    sometimes talking's not enough dunk.

    nothing wrong with me... and with that i'll leave :)
    oh scary... 40000 morbidly obese christians wearing fanny packs invading europe is probably the least scariest thing since I watched an edited version of The Care Bears movie in an extremely brightly lit cinema.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    cate-ster, you done well here
    that is a big chunk to bite into
    nicely done
    that would sure suck to feel like that tho
    thank you for sharing
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
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