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she

catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
edited August 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
wandering slowly down the path
she thinks she sees
she's blind
everything she thought could be
turns out to be not right
has she the strength to walk away
to finally see inside
or does she wait for him to act
to leave everything behind
slowly wandering off her path
she trips she falls
so blind.
hear my name
take a good look
this could be the day
hold my hand
lie beside me
i just need to say
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  • madjackmadjack Posts: 213
    Deep
    Come on and play on the edge of life with me. Its fun and I love every minute of it!!!
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Cate-ster, you and me share SHE as a title for piece of writing.
    People are blinded.
    (Helps cate-ster up from her terrible fall)
    (ouch) I bet that fuckin hurt a bit.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    chadwick wrote:
    Cate-ster, you and me share SHE as a title for piece of writing.
    People are blinded.
    (Helps cate-ster up from her terrible fall)
    (ouch) I bet that fuckin hurt a bit.

    who says SHE is me? :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    catefrances wrote:
    who says SHE is me? :)

    Good point miss.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    Sure hope it isn't !

    Very nice work, too.
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
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