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An Admission

votegirlvotegirl Posts: 95
edited January 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Gotta wash that man right out of my hair
but I was the one that was dirty
late night pleas for forgiveness
making a mockery out of your innocence
I lost that a long, long time ago...

a soft target is a tender heart
exploitation too easy, it seems
I toppled your dreams
and dissappeared.
I burst, out
I'm transformed!
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    It's short, it's not sweet and it's friggin' great! I love the opening line and the last stanza was bitchin'! Very cool.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Pearl_Jam_NecklacePearl_Jam_Necklace Posts: 501
    votegirl wrote:
    Gotta wash that man right out of my hair
    but I was the one that was dirty
    late night pleas for forgiveness
    making a mockery out of your innocence
    I lost that a long, long time ago...

    a soft target is a tender heart
    exploitation too easy, it seems
    I toppled your dreams
    and dissappeared.


    that was awesome . a great poem !
    ...It's only after disaster that we can be resurrected...
    it's only after you've lost everything ...that you are free to do anything....(Fight Club)

    ... I'll ride the wave...where it takes me....
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