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snow

AndyMandersonAndyManderson Posts: 167
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the snow stopped falling
everything became clear
the only problem is you enjoy snow
you can move to be near it more often,
or stay where you are and not get much
the world could always shift in orbit
then it may come back more often
either way the seasons always change
sometimes new spring life is good
sometimes it's not what you need
only the stars can tell you
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    "only the stars can tell you"

    Andy, you're so beautiful. Don't change. Please?

    Love,
    Jessie
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Originally posted by AndyManderson
    the snow stopped falling
    everything became clear
    the only problem is you enjoy snow
    you can move to be near it more often,
    or stay where you are and not get much
    the world could always shift in orbit
    then it may come back more often
    either way the seasons always change
    sometimes new spring life is good
    sometimes it's not what you need
    only the stars can tell you

    I really like the way this shifts into a list of options around the third line. It seems so open and thoughtful. :)
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  • AndyMandersonAndyManderson Posts: 167
    just too many choices to make, sometimes you never know which is right.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by AndyManderson
    just too many choices to make, sometimes you never know which is right.
    truer words were never spoken

    eeeeeek...
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
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