shit on you

GetRight1981
GetRight1981 Posts: 5
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i shit on you
i shit on you
more or less
what could you do
to stop the wall of shit i spew

why o' why
these tears i cry
can not stop my mess
i will have to not tell a lie
this poem is just a waste of time

written under 30 seconds by me for no reason.....
There's still time. It's no crime to escape.

You've been taught, whipped into shape, now they got you in line.
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Hey, if that's how you felt, it's not a waste of time! :)

    And BTW, were you listening to D12's song "Shit On You" while you wrote this? If you've never heard it and you can take Eminem and his crew---you should check out that tune---the lyrics are quite disturbingly amusing. :D

    Cheer up! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen

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