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Haiku You

Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
edited June 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Steady streams wander
A lesson in paradox
What have you learned


Thanks to everyone who read my last post. I'm new around here and it was nice to get some responses.

Peace Out
If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
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  • BinFrogBinFrog Posts: 7,309
    What say you now friend?
    You say you want to wander.
    Then wander away.
    Bright eyed kid: "Wow Typo Man, you're the best!"
    Typo Man: "Thanks kidz, but remembir, stay in skool!"
  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    does no one Haiku?
    simple is as simple does
    excercise your mind
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    A lamb's placenta,
    A drape on grey bogland stone
    Flaps, empty, in rain.
  • BlackPilateBlackPilate Posts: 14
    Cringer my dear friend
    Why must we be enemies
    You hansom devil

    Man I sure am parched
    Oh I see, you are empty
    When it rains, it pours.

    Jager kicks my ass
    Who was that girl from last night
    Dude, where is my car?
    "What's that you're hacking off? Is it my torso? It is! My precious torso!"
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    Ever so slowly
    fading light escapes the plains,
    oh glorious night!


    No, I haiku not
    These words are forced, and it shows
    I prefer free prose
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    Originally posted by Buru
    No, I haiku not
    These words are forced, and it shows
    I prefer free prose

    all poems are poetry
    sometimes the heart needs coaching
    we can all but try
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    An apricot tree,
    Limbs low and heavy with fruit
    Lives in my backyard.
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