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until we meet again

Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
edited June 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
alone
untouched
diversifying
Spreading wings like an angel of Hope
reality is grounded as I hover
my gaze extends
I am pleased

With that, Ladies and Gentlemen, I bid you adieu until a later time (probably about four hours) as there are bars and pubs to be had

Peace Out
If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    Good night. I, for one, enjoy your newness of vision in this forum.
  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    Does the drunken state--alchohol or otherwise--enhance or detract from the poetry experience? basically, is the truth we feel when apart from ourselves relevant to our everday lives. If so, how?
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • PrettyNoosePrettyNoose Posts: 146
    Originally posted by Traver DiDiminico

    reality is grounded as I hover

    nice.
    her life was saved by Rock 'n' Roll
  • empirical_meansempirical_means Posts: 4
    really nice!
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    Does the drunken state--alchohol or otherwise--enhance or detract from the poetry experience? basically, is the truth we feel when apart from ourselves relevant to our everday lives. If so, how?

    I'm on the wagon now....so I'm about to find out.....

    I like the way you wrote that short one....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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