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Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
My thoughts turn from the task at hand
to the task in mind
I lose my way as I
travel inward
The people around me
like a ball of Theseus' string
Relationships are the ties that
bind me
If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
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  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    expression
    I cannot let go
    the hour sidles
    but I remain looking upward
    regression
    I become my basest self
    instructed by instinct
    marionetted by desire
    submission
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    sometimes i post on here just to share
    sometimes i read in here just to learn
    i always ejoy it

    :)
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    instructed by instinct
    marionetted by desire
    submission

    familiar feeling....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    Originally posted by ISN
    familiar feeling....

    That's what's so great about poetry--the attempt to express the unexpressable can succeed through shared unexpressable feelings/experiences

    Cheers
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    poetry.....the unmentionable in pursuit of the inexpressible.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    Originally posted by ISN
    poetry.....the unmentionable in pursuit of the inexpressible.....

    again, well said
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
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