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hmmm...

Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
edited March 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Promise once held a life
Gentle hands cradling
This newborn potential
--Fast forward--
Greatness has taken a break
Frustration is filling in nicely
The close of night brings
Dreams of not crazy
Sense is whatever I feel like--
The dawn will sort it out
Rays of the Sun cut
Through elaborate rationales grown
Over once trodden truths
--Rewind--
If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    teh newborn stage is not my favourite......I'm hoping any greatness he achieves will be credited to him......my greatness is heaping piles of elephant shit at teh zoo.....and riding elephants in the jin.....to teh gym.....I hate Jim....I love Johnny.....and Torin, is a big baby a great big babby......but when he was newborn, he was inconsequential......speaking of which.....sorry
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    ISN wrote:
    teh newborn stage is not my favourite......I'm hoping any greatness he achieves will be credited to him......my greatness is heaping piles of elephant shit at teh zoo.....and riding elephants in the jin.....to teh gym.....I hate Jim....I love Johnny.....and Torin, is a big baby a great big babby......but when he was newborn, he was inconsequential......speaking of which.....sorry

    yeah, it's a bit awkward, but I wrote it stream of consciousness. I'll have to work on it later
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
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