Brain aneurism

Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I find my life more poetic than my pen...
Mine eyes receive and
Remit in excess of my fingers.
My voice is never lacking...
Only my care and my
Participation.
If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    Brain Aneurism
    I find my life more poetic than my pen...
    Mine eyes receive and
    Remit in excess of my fingers.
    My voice is never lacking...
    Only my care and my
    Participation.

    at first I thought this was a poem about not writing poetry, but now I see it as a poem about not being alive
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISN wrote:
    Brain Aneurism



    at first I thought this was a poem about not writing poetry, but now I see it as a poem about not being alive

    Writing poetry = being alive

    thought, circle, aneurism
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    thought, circle, aneurism.....heheheheheh.......circular thinking is a symptom of madness......but it probably would only cause an aneurism rarely
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISN wrote:
    thought, circle, aneurism.....heheheheheh.......circular thinking is a symptom of madness......but it probably would only cause an aneurism rarely

    God, I hope so...really I was just quoting the mighty Jack Black when he discussed the difficulty of chosing what T-shirt to wear come gig time.

    It's Tenacious D time motherfuckers
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    that made me blush
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • ISN wrote:
    that made me blush

    It happens...just make sure you buy the Tenaious D cd...you'll rock/laugh so hard you'll throw away whatever ill advised late-night ab machine product you've purchased (not that anyone would do that). :)
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    okay, I'll keep it in mind.....they are very funny.....so nite nite every1 :)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • It happens...just make sure you buy the Tenaious D cd...you'll rock/laugh so hard you'll throw away whatever ill advised late-night ab machine product you've purchased (not that anyone would do that). :)

    :D LOL! That was funny! :D I like how your poem looks on the page. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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