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Trip

SoundSound Posts: 579
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Trip


A painfull kiss

at the heart of the river

a small price

for the joy

spread in the red

infinity of blood

when the ants take the derm

and peace comes again

and you are in your heaven

the mind becomes to big

for the room
It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

Jim Carrol
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  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    i hear something.

    the sound of a full mailbox.

    :D
  • sevensinssevensins Posts: 887
    I see something.....a good poem. :)
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  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    thank you seven

    it's my first ever
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • CranMalReignCranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    I hope this one isn't about rainbow kisses. Mmmm... red badge of courage.
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  • bambi girlbambi girl Posts: 406
    hey sound,

    wow, thats beautiful, and for a first, im impressed!


    thanks for sharing it with us :)
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    You are just too sweet Bambi
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    for someone who said you did not have a way for English language....

    I would say you have mastered it beautifully.

    impressive.
  • john girljohn girl Posts: 308
    "the ants take the derm"

    yeah!
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    I still don't know how i came up with that.
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • 20_layne_xien20_layne_xien Posts: 57
    nice...very nice
    ...time is never wasted when you're wasted all the time...

    "breathe, breathe in the air...don't be afraid to care...leave but don't leave me...look around and choose your own ground...for long you live and high you fly...and smiles you'll give and tears you'll cry...and all you touch and all you see...is all your life will ever be..."
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    thanks for bringing Trip back to life
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    look for "wolf vedder" i miss that one
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    Originally posted by Sound
    Trip


    A painfull kiss

    at the heart of the river

    a small price

    for the joy

    spread in the red

    infinity of blood

    when the ants take the derm

    and peace comes again

    and you are in your heaven

    the mind becomes to big

    for the room
    i can feel my mind expanding from you:) thank you
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    girl you have no faith in medicine
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    im sorry sound was that meant for me? if so why do you say that? but you are right i have no faith in medicine lol i take alot of it , i think some is okand some is just meant to make money for prescription companys. but i do not understand why you said that, please clerify.:)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    i was high on on wine and listening to White stripes

    "girl you have no faith in medicine" is one of their songs
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    thanks sound for clearing that up for me:)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    uhum
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    what a gem
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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