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Wolf Vedder

SoundSound Posts: 579
edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Wolf Vedder

I cry loud
so i can be heard
give you
my best
in hope that you can learn
and wish for more
i'll scream until you hear me
might be a slow volume
i'll shout
i'm never going to close my eyes
so i can see
the change in your mind
taking place
and the waves will take us there
you will see my world
and find your own
with a scream
i'll give you love and pain
and you will finally understand
that i am your friend
It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

Jim Carrol
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  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    and so you are heard,
    Sound,
    and we will all
    finally understand
    that
    a man like Sound,
    a South AmeriCAN,
    can speak his heart mind
    like a sound
    that travels through
    the woods at night
    so the birds take flight

    and flying higher we can see that words
    the words
    he writes
    makes us all take flight and when he does,
    we all
    under
    stand



    -they say that people can only really write poetry in their birth language. the language the were raised
    UP
    to speak. Sound, you vibrate us all....

    that was lovely.


























    and i also say,
    who the fuck was your english teacher. he deserves the peaceful poems prize for growing you in his classroom.
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    My friend GITA

    I'm going to have a great night of sleep after that.

    You surelly made your presence count as allways, in this thread with your kind words.

    Thank you so much.
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • bambi girlbambi girl Posts: 406
    very nice sound :) very nice indeed.

    xox
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    Thank you sweety
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    Bem aventurado aquele que possui amigos
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    hl
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    are like
    cool

    look at this craaaaaaazy pad!
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :D Miss it no more, Sound!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    thanks sweety

    you are the best
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Sound
    Bem aventurado aquele que possui amigos

    thats exactly what i was thinking.
  • seekitseekit Posts: 73
    yes I learn you don't even
    need to shout
    fine words you
    express
    to us
    no doubt......

    Thank you......
    Seek It
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    Originally posted by Sound
    Wolf Vedder

    I cry loud
    so i can be heard
    give you
    my best
    in hope that you can learn
    and wish for more
    i'll scream until you hear me
    might be a slow volume
    i'll shout
    i'm never going to close my eyes
    so i can see
    the change in your mind
    taking place
    and the waves will take us there
    you will see my world
    and find your own
    with a scream
    i'll give you love and pain
    and you will finally understand
    that i am your friend
    sound move in at my home and please just follow me around and tell your poetry to me all day please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    "shoots out of the mind" poetry
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • ForeverAJammerForeverAJammer Posts: 116
    Sheer beauty..i love this poem....ure beautiful thank you so much for that;)
    i miss you already...


  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    thanks dude

    that's how i feel about Ed
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • Pearl Jam and toastPearl Jam and toast Posts: 4,475
    Originally posted by Sound
    My friend GITA

    I'm going to have a great night of sleep after that.

    You surelly made your presence count as allways, in this thread with your kind words.

    Thank you so much.
    well spoken!

    very much like eddie...

    i might print that out and put it on my wall :)
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

    http://www.wishlistfoundation.org

    Oh my, they dropped the leash.



    Morgan Freeman/Clint Eastwood 08' for President!

    "Make our day"
  • Pearl Jam and toastPearl Jam and toast Posts: 4,475
    i agree by the way ^^
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

    http://www.wishlistfoundation.org

    Oh my, they dropped the leash.



    Morgan Freeman/Clint Eastwood 08' for President!

    "Make our day"
  • Pearl Jam and toastPearl Jam and toast Posts: 4,475
    Originally posted by August storm
    sound move in at my home and please just follow me around and tell your poetry to me all day please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    lol, sound make august a tape and mail it.
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

    http://www.wishlistfoundation.org

    Oh my, they dropped the leash.



    Morgan Freeman/Clint Eastwood 08' for President!

    "Make our day"
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    quote:
    Originally posted by Sound
    My friend GITA

    I'm going to have a great night of sleep after that.

    You surelly made your presence count as allways, in this thread with your kind words.

    Thank you so much.

    Originally posted by Pearl Jam and toast
    well spoken!

    very much like eddie...

    i might print that out and put it on my wall :)

    im so confused.
    what is this?

    Twister from HELL!?
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    thanks man


    and gita is great



    august is so nice, a good friend
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    Originally posted by Pearl Jam and toast
    lol, sound make august a tape and mail it.
    good idea thanks hope he does:)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    Originally posted by Sound
    thanks man


    and gita is great



    august is so nice, a good friend
    thank you sound you are a good friend:)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Sound,
    another bump to remind you how creative you can be.
    Don't worry about the dry times.
    Just sing to us if your heart can't find your own words to sing.
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    what am i going to do without you?
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • BhagavadGitaBhagavadGita Posts: 1,748
    Originally posted by Sound
    what am i going to do without you?

    We
    R
    All
    Made
    Of
    Stars
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    egocentric

    i am
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • Ok2GoOk2Go Posts: 102
    stars are not egocentric, just bright.
    "and then, one Thursday, nearly two thousand years after one man had been nailed to a tree for saying how great it would be to be nice to people for a change, a girl sitting on her own in a small cafe in Rickmansworth suddenly realized what it was that had been going wrong in the world all this time, and she finally knew how the world could be made a good and happy place. This time it was right and no one had to get nailed to anything. Sadly, before she could get to a phone to tell anyone about it, a terrible stupid catastrophe occurred, and the idea was lost forever."

    Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    From what I've seen it may actually be easier for second language speakers to write modern American Poetry, they speak more simply, they aren't burdened by extra grammer and useless words, they get right down to it because they understand the beauty they are trying to convey but not the language so they say it naturally more simple than we would growing up with it - the only thing I can think of to describe is like conveying the wonder of a child with the mind of a full grown person
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    that was the best definition
    and so beautiful
    and i'm so thankfull
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
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