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Loved one

SoundSound Posts: 579
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
We are slaves
to the evolution
locked
in eletrical boxes
fighting
for a conection
with love
it is supposed to be hard
i'll wait
for my love is bigger than
my patience
It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

Jim Carrol
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  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    why is it supposed to be hard?
    ~all is full of love~
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    to everything we want there is difficulty
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • lifeisworthlifeisworth Posts: 186
    the degree dependent upon the desire?
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
  • JulijanaJulijana Posts: 18
    Absolutely.
    once you know
    you can never go back...
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Originally posted by Sound
    We are slaves
    to the evolution
    locked
    in eletrical boxes
    fighting
    for a conection
    with love
    it is supposed to be hard
    i'll wait
    for my love is bigger than
    my patience


    love = patience

    You must be patient. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • seekitseekit Posts: 73
    love is freedom!
    Seek It
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    do you have freedom
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • seekitseekit Posts: 73
    just for today I have freedom we'll see what happens tomorrow
    Seek It
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    that's good
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • Stolen Pencil420Stolen Pencil420 Posts: 119
    Love is freedom, yet I'm held in captivity.
    "Trying to be a person you're not is a waste of the person you really are."- Kurt D. Cobain (R.I.P February 20, 1967- April 5, 1994, we love u Kurt)



  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    somebody will set you free
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • Stolen Pencil420Stolen Pencil420 Posts: 119
    "But only in their dreams can men be truly free. Twas always thus, and always thus will be." -Robin Williams as John Keating
    "Trying to be a person you're not is a waste of the person you really are."- Kurt D. Cobain (R.I.P February 20, 1967- April 5, 1994, we love u Kurt)



  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    love is respect and adventurous and it should be free, but for many it is not, but when you reach a point of freedom in love you are rich in exploration and happiness. with love you will eventually find your patience........i am alomst there, i have learned to walk away for a moment when things get heated and have come to live by these two sayings please take them with you in your search for happiness...........................................


    whats good for the goose is good for the gander................

    and


    if you let something you love go and its meant to be with you it will return and become something great!
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    what's gander?
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • August stormAugust storm Posts: 186
    Originally posted by Sound
    what's gander?
    goose and gander same as male and female:)so basically if a man can do it expect that a woman can also and vice versa
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
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