J.J.Samuel... keep it going

SoundSound Posts: 579
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pretty boy JJ
smokes mentol cigars
likes to fuck many ladies
thought he would
go on ok
life would never change
read peter pan
too mamy times
papa jumped into bed
with anty
mama jumped in front
of the train
dad hangs himself
couldn't live without mom
but the fuck
couldn't be the same
from that on
he knew life wouldn't
keep his flow
onipotent in his mind
until the world
told him wrong
he was bound
to grow strong
strong hand
strong gun
he was bound to be bound
JJ'd say
what the world want from me
isn't what the world gave to me
pretty boy JJ
full of reazon
but with no shame
who is to say
he is to blame
read peter pan
too many times...

keep it going
It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

Jim Carrol
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  • blew away with
    the wind
    caught in sails
    of big things
    smart ideas
    new inventions
    but with similar
    intentions
    to the crooks
    and the barons
    make the bucks
    get a mansion
    and in endless
    procession
    the girls strip
    and aim to
    please
    the man bound
    to fantasy
    who read too many
    times
    Peter Pan
    beat the pirates
    with a wave of his
    hand
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    JJ found his center
    in the child
    she was
    JJ found his pleasure
    in being bigger
    stronger
    like a gun
    with a lot of bullets

    JJ spoke in bullets
    like lists
    of things to do
    and do
    she would
    hoping JJ'd shut the fuck up
    and be happy

    but

    but

    eventually we learn
    that bullets beget bullets

    and infinity
    we saw
    in the three-way mirror
    for all the holes
    passed she
    through
    It's all yellow.


  • he who has now found
    he is nothing but humble
    now that his eyes have set beside greater than he
    now that the mirror has turned against him
    he who is in the end, who silenced he
    once a man who read
    too many times
    peter pan


    she is now a scale tipped to one side
    living in a world jj left behind
    strong is she now who holds the bullets
    but chooses to leave them lay aside
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    thanks for the replys guys

    nice touch

    three
    different
    beautiful
    styles
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • phishgodphishgod Posts: 133
    jj smiles,
    through turquoise
    skies into
    August Moons,
    silver bullets
    & white
    horses stalk
    coral sands.

    Star imagery
    pales beneath
    plush night,
    and tomorrow,
    tomorrow isn't
    just anyday,
    maybe jj's,
    & jj smiles.


    fun thread, nice work :)
    rockon,
    phishgod
  • But nights
    amidst stars
    flickering candles
    gold mantles
    beneath fire
    above praise
    we see soon
    that we dig
    graves

    for our fathers
    for our brothers
    for our victims
    for our mothers

    and our
    passions
    set us free
    but kept in bondage
    our timid
    loves
    and for
    poor JJ
    all that
    was above
    simply faded
    like those
    stars that
    died into
    blue skies
    when the sun
    rose on
    the tombstone
    of freedom
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    that became a good story
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • i liked how august got thrown into it:) made me smile even if it had nothing to do with me.....................
    i miss you sound.
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    me too


    you are a love boat captain

    i knew it
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • Originally posted by Sound
    me too


    you are a love boat captain

    i knew it
    i cant wait to be faithfull lol
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    devil girl you
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
  • he eheheheh eheheheh :)
    whats good for the goose is good for the gander
  • SoundSound Posts: 579
    forget the past
    and learn fast
    all that is good in the rest
    all far from your nest
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol
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