Sweet melody
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I like the way i feel
i like everyday until
i stop and feel the chill
my pace is in its rare calmness
and i don't care for air
or sun
i'm one with everyone
i lay and tell you lies
and i fight for them to fly
in your mind i try to get
so you just can't forget
give me something better
be mine forever
otherwise
whatever
it is all about time
and the quest to make you mine
i like everyday until
i stop and feel the chill
my pace is in its rare calmness
and i don't care for air
or sun
i'm one with everyone
i lay and tell you lies
and i fight for them to fly
in your mind i try to get
so you just can't forget
give me something better
be mine forever
otherwise
whatever
it is all about time
and the quest to make you mine
It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.
Jim Carrol
Jim Carrol
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i can really see through your work how you have progressed further and further with your writing. it's amazing to see it grow and sprout!! good stuff.
I'm not that good... it was just something i felt
and fortunetly sounds good, i think...
xoxo
Jim Carrol
i love this part.everyone wants to feel like someone is pursuing them in earnest.it gives hope.