"Can You Hear It?".

The PoetThe Poet Posts: 24
A forest of oak trees doth seldom arise, not producing the paper, they make; just as forests of acorns don't fall from the sky, from resounding your crisis of faith; just as old as an oak tree that never arose, not withstanding an ultimate fate; just as loud, as an acorn doth seldom grow up in a forest, turned into estates.
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    this is good....

    :)

    more later
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • The PoetThe Poet Posts: 24
    Thanks, ISN. This is the final poem of three :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I want to decompose your peom......I want to but I cain't.....I will decompose.....only prose......and other paltry offerings.....I won't deconstruct poetry like this......which....gets inside......places that I don't even know myself
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • argonautargonaut Posts: 11
    are you a whitman fan?

    I like this poem. I don't understand most of this poem. maybe all of it. So I think either it's difficult or you don't make sense or both. Poetry. I like it.
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