Never leave

marcus77marcus77 Posts: 41
Okay, this one might be a bit corney:

Just to look into your eyes,
Drown in the deepness of them,
Gaze into the mirror of the soul,
Getting lost in a place I want to stay in.

The feel of your touch,
Your warm body pressed against mine,
To feel your heart beat with mine,
As two beat as one in time.

The sound of your voice,
Comforting like a lullaby,
My ears have never been happier,
If they could, they would cry.

The smell of your body,
Like a sweet perfume,
Rose gardens wilt in envy,
For they will never surpass you.

So tell me again that you love me,
And I will say those words too,
For they are just the tip of how I feel,
When I think of you.

Please don't ever let this moment end,
Don't ever go away,
I rather die right now,
Then be without you another day.
"So i'll just lie alone and wait for the dream,
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
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Comments

  • i forgeti forget Posts: 281
    Mr. 77, you sure could sweep a girl off her feet.
  • marcus77marcus77 Posts: 41
    Lies make Baby Jesus cry...just kidding.

    Thank you dez higher. It has not happened yet, but maybe, just maybe someday...
    "So i'll just lie alone and wait for the dream,
    where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
  • tremorstremors Posts: 8,051
    nice! very moving, reminds me of a time I was living
    this:

    You'll remember me when the west wind moves
    Upon the fields of barley
    You'll forget the sun in his jealous sky
    As we walk in the fields of gold

    So she took her love
    For to gaze awhile
    Upon the fields of barley
    In his arms she fell as her hair came down
    Among the fields of gold

    Will you stay with me, will you be my love
    Among the fields of barley
    We'll forget the sun in his jealous sky
    As we lie in the fields of gold

    See the west wind move like a lover so
    Upon the fields of barley
    Feel her body rise when you kiss her mouth
    Among the fields of gold
    I never made promises lightly
    And there have been some that I've broken
    But I swear in the days still left
    We'll walk in the fields of gold
    We'll walk in the fields of gold

    Many years have passed since those summer days
    Among the fields of barley
    See the children run as the sun goes down
    Among the fields of gold
    You'll remember me when the west wind moves
    Upon the fields of barley
    You can tell the sun in his jealous sky
    When we walked in the fields of gold
    When we walked in the fields of gold
    When we walked in the fields of gold

    (Sting)


    Shit, you've got me all emotional now!
    Cancel my subscription to the Ressurection
    Send my credentials to the house of detention

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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by tremors
    Shit, you've got me all emotional now!

    you and me both.

    another poignant post from marcus.

    thanks for letting us read them.
  • marcus77marcus77 Posts: 41
    Thank you all for reading them. And thank you for all of you who wrote me. I like knowing that I've touched someone.
    "So i'll just lie alone and wait for the dream,
    where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
  • Very beautiful Marcus. I remember feeling that way not all that long ago. Ugh! Think I'm gonna go cry now.
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • PrettyNoosePrettyNoose Posts: 146
    corney is effective :)
    nicely written yet again, i'm quite a fan of your work :)
    her life was saved by Rock 'n' Roll
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