For all the ladies...
marcus77
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Tell me what you think (or feel):
~sorry, I deleted the first revision, see the next entry.
~sorry, I deleted the first revision, see the next entry.
"So i'll just lie alone and wait for the dream,
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
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I can't promise that I won't be clingy,
I can't promise that I won't be distant,
But I can promise you that I will try to be there,
When you need me the most.
I can't promise that I will never hurt you,
I can't promise that we'll never fight,
But I can promise that I won't hate you,
And that my love will never fade away.
It doesn't matter if you're not thin as a supermodel,
I'd be afraid that I might break you if you were.
To me you are even more beautiful,
And will continue to be as we grow old.
I can buy you roses, diamonds, and candy,
Physical tokens of my love for you,
But if I was a pauper and unable to afford these things,
Could you still love me the same?
A lover, a best friend, maybe someday,
A wife and mother to the our children,
Someone to spend the rest of my life,
With children as beautiful as she is.
I want to feel the warmth of your embrace,
I want to see the light reflected in your eyes,
I want to hear the melody of your voice,
I want to taste the sweetness that is you.
Because even when I am right next to you,
It's just too far away.
I want to be inside of you,
And not only in a sexual way.
I want you inside me too,
I want your heart and love,
To keep you safe from any the bad things,
To protect and love you will all that I am.
It does not matter whom either of us have and have not been with,
I want to make love to you as if we're virgins,
Let's leave our pasts where they are,
And build a future together.
Even though I could write you a song or poem,
Or even look up love the definition in the dictionary,
But I don't just want to tell you how I feel,
I want to show you each and every day.
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
Refreshing and beautiful, marcus77. Makes me feel all
it's endearing, but... somehow lacks that specific elusivity so intrinsic in the male perspective... that thing that made Han Solo say "I know" when Leah said "I Love You"...
infuriating...
but...
this information in the wrong kind of woman's hands could be very damaging in the long run
jmo, and only one of my multi-perspectives...
however the author has covered ass very well.the one question asked leads me to think this is a key issue for the besmitten.
possible translation?:
sometimes i'll be like a little baby or else ignore you if i'm busy with work or my buddies.
but if you're fussing i'll take a moment to find out if you need sex or calming down.
i still need to vent a lot,and you'll be the brunt of it because i trust you,because i'm an immature asshole sometimes
i'd never hate you and i want to believe love is forever because if we break up,i can still say i love you and you won't be pissed
i wish you'd stick to your diet because you'd be really hot
but if we have rough sex i can go nuts though which is cool
at least your face and parts are real,and hey you look like you'll age well
taking all the above into account,i have no idea why you'd love a jerk like me
i'm a neurotic rich workaholic who's had tons of women chasing me for my money
if i don't ever give you the lifestyle of the rich and famous will you freak out?
a warm ass and warm feet,somebody to take my shit and keep me organized and give great head
be the best mom ever to me and the kids because i want chocolate chip cookies and jello too,gorgeous
(i wanna pinch you under your apron)
i want unconditional love and your patience even though i'm such a turd
your voice calms me down and you make me so hard thinking of us doing it
i guess we know each other so well by now we're a part of each other in every way
and if we're sharing that kind of intimacy it staves off my fear of dying
you make me feel really alive sharing your life and your life force with me
that's why i want a lot of sex because i need to feel intensely alive as much as possible
give yourself to me,nobody else
don't even let there be a ghost of a chance you'll leave me
i want to be your only hero because i know what it feels like to be fucked around on and fucked over
i'll take care of you if you don't make a fool of me
i've tried out a lot of lovers,don't ask me about my past,just be clean
i might be clumsy or inept or lazy as a lover just to keep it kind of innocent
i will be the last guy you ever do unless i croak,are you ready for that fact?
i don't have time to think up more ways to get your attention or make those pink bubbles of lovey-dovey come out of your head
so think about it
if i slow down long enough to really do any of this,be ready alright?
lol!
i loved writing this.i can SO relate.
certainly NOT where marcus is coming from, eh?
but...
well
Lmao...
sounds like someone i know... LOL....
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
same here..:(
that was beautiful.
And Felicity, that was fucking hilarious! You nailed my asshole soon-to-be-ex-husband.
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
just look around...
8/08 - Ed solo in DC, 6/09 Ed in B'more,
10/10 - Brad in B'more
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."
me too but i'm bad at memorizing so i'd have to read it. do you think she's in seattle?
any wife would be very proud of such a talented and sensitive husband.
i'm glad you found my rebuttal funny,i was worried you'd be offended.you have a great sense of humour obviously too.
you're a sweetie.
Thank you very much. Now I just need to find one...[still looking]
Are you kidding? I laughed my ass off. Too bad you're not in Seattle.
where i'm not ugly and your lookin' at me."