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Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
8-7-06

Samples from earth
Lavender and calendula
Extraneous buttons
sever or tie

A wind smeared lollygagger enters

In your minds mind
She lies there
Sewing wooden sutures
With a rhythm that
Peeks and hides

a riddled light

you began the trine
forgot to place
substance in your
faux hand carved ebony bowl
so prestigious
with factory carvings and depressions
that seeped into your lives

Rusted walls with smothered sunlight

Cutaneous wine curtains
Drizzle down beleaguered heights
of days you thought should have been
bountiful and gay
Into the shudder that has become
Your life

A woman can only escape twice
"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
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Comments

  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    first impression: gah.... very very nice :D i love its twists

    i need more time to focus on meaning, but on the surface, it's very deep :)
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    oh

    and "peeks and hides" was surprisingly delightful


    CUTE!
  • Thanks Miss Nazi!
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
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