I wanna make love to you with my voice

Astral StarAstral Star Posts: 129
edited February 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
1-26-07

I wanna make love to you with my voice
Softly in the dead of night
Like a wind that carries your
Dreams into lamplights and fireflies

I wanna let your guitar chords stroke
Me into solace
Tempt me into glee
Turn me inside out
Inspite of me

I wanna cringe at your breaths
Between takes
When the light in you escapes
Your patience drives me wild

Furried, frenzied as I drive each mile
To meet you in the bars
That hold the notes we play

In our heightened state
When the love is not too late
We’ll meet in a thick red note
That drips slowly down my throat
The amber wings of your guitar
Carry it gently oh so far

Mesmerized we both shall be
And collapse at the riddled glee
Of that windfall in the middle of our song
Where we held each other all along

No earthly flesh need ever meet
When our music is so incredibly sweet
Sweeping us into galaxies
Where Sirius contemplates our revelries
We lust, laugh, and fall away
Just for a moment to play

Become my love in song and tune
A beckoning light against the moon
And when dawn reminds us of the template
That creates the harsh rigid day
Our song will forever play and play and play
26-07
"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
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Comments

  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    That's what's called giving the world a damn good seeing to, with a poem. :D
  • geniegenie Posts: 2,222
    aawww!!!!! nice structure to the poem, it rhymes and the words chosen are good! it can be a nice Valentine's day poem!! :D:D
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I love this one!! :)
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  • *sigh*....



    some voices feel like really good sex
    in the chest...
    i'm listening to Layne right now...

    yummmmmmyyyyyy
  • Ohhh I sent this as a Valentine Poem to my favorite musicians and they LUVED it. Thanks for the suggestion and thanks for the love!
    "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to eachother." Mother Theresa
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