amazing Grace

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edited March 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
breath in breath out
each breath bringing you closer to heaven.
I watched you fight a courageous war
against a faceless enemy that battles unfairly.
my love for you knows no bounds
you asked for nothing and gave of yourself so much.
even in your direst moments
it was not about you but us.

if i could have taken your place
without thought I would have
because it was you who made me
it was you who cared for me
it was you who showed me how to love
how to live and how to give.

rest now for you are where your heart belongs.
I will always remember you
I will always love you
I've never met Ed,never shook his hand, talked to him or had my picture taken with him.
But I did stay at a Holiday Inn Express last night.
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Comments

  • tenaciousAtenaciousA Posts: 604
    lovely ....

    thank you
    ~all is full of love~
  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    that's wonderful neil.

    I am sorry about the content of it though:(
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • borisdiscoborisdisco Posts: 123
    peace brother
    the whole world will be different soon
    the whole world will be relieved
  • Gorgeous! Precious!

    You take care! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • KBaxter74KBaxter74 Posts: 30
    That really is touching and I feel your pain as well.
    Cannot stop the thought, running in the dark, coming up a which way sign, all good truants must decide.
    -Immortality
  • the love you take is equal to...the love...you make

    beautiful. So sorry my friend.
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    lovely poem, even if really sad...
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • amazing, touching, and healing
    thanks
    Rarghstarfarian.
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