tried this cam back and then reworked it

partingways
partingways Posts: 20
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Talk about

Words in my head returned
My mind tripped
Truths never to be said or returned
Only my feet are on the ground
Static...

Talk about the thought
of no moonlite tonite
We... pause...apart
How uncomfortable thinking of the future is.

As the sunset passed and dusk was long,
there was only the darkness.
I needed to tell you,
that light is you-
that light is beautiful.

I couldnt move.
I couldnt leave.
I wouldnt leave.

Not without the moon.
for every tool they lend us......a loss of independence.



American Deaths
Since war began (3/19/03): 2314




Lisa Simpson: "Principal Skinner all you are doing is stealing"
Principal Skinner: "Welcome to Dick Cheneys' America, Lisa"
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  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    To the moon! :)

    A great lonely light in times of darkness!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • partingways
    partingways Posts: 20
    thanks pw
    for every tool they lend us......a loss of independence.



    American Deaths
    Since war began (3/19/03): 2314




    Lisa Simpson: "Principal Skinner all you are doing is stealing"
    Principal Skinner: "Welcome to Dick Cheneys' America, Lisa"
  • partingways
    partingways Posts: 20
    Talk About

    Words in my mouth; returned.
    My mind tripped.
    Truths never said or asked.
    Only my feet back on the ground.
    Static...

    Talk about, the thought of no moonlite tonite.
    We...pause...apart
    How uncomfortable thinking of the future is.

    As the sunset passed, forgotten, and
    dusk was long, there was only the darkness.
    I needed to tell you,
    that light is you-
    that light is beautiful.

    I couldnt move.
    I couldnt leave.
    I wouldnt leave.

    Not without the moon.
    for every tool they lend us......a loss of independence.



    American Deaths
    Since war began (3/19/03): 2314




    Lisa Simpson: "Principal Skinner all you are doing is stealing"
    Principal Skinner: "Welcome to Dick Cheneys' America, Lisa"
  • setaside2
    setaside2 Posts: 1,084
    tis a moonlit day on the board


    talk of the moon
    I'm stepping in front of the gushing hydrant in a hurricane. I'd like to see the traction I keep.

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