Acid Rain Millenia!!!

Sleeping
Dirt caked leaves serve you well in this nest
Huddles of confinement sinking deep into masses of blackberry and shrubbery
You've done well down there
Down so far... for the weeks it took to crush out a tear
Does the wood comfort? Conform to your shell?
Such curves they'd have to present
Foolishly faced with acid in drops
Acid rain for the party of such a millenia


In the passage below, recalled is your life. If life is truly the hours before death as I'd like to belive...


"So you want to discover something new?
...about yourself, this plague around you?
...about the soil and this world your bound to?"
You stared blankly as he spoke in these tongues
"Its fun with machine guns for the whole lot"
screamed the dealer of childhood sorrows and knee scabbing plots.
"You may find yourself clinging to the highest branch of the Maybury Buck...
but all will be well once the sun comes up."
He repeated that last bit for the hours to come
Still you hid from the ceiling and it's nay saying demons
...as if it were real...

Life seems so vivid when you refuse to adapt to such a drug
but all the pretty colors make the sickest ones feel loved
so take his hand, take his gun
live for visuals and knowledge won
but remember the dealer and how he speaks
while you suck on death and your mother weaps...


~EL
They filled me full of drink
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame
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Comments

  • the most clearly stated compostition of yours ive read :cool:
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

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    Oh my, they dropped the leash.



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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Life seems so vivid when you refuse to adapt to such a drug
    but all the pretty colors make the sickest ones feel loved
    so take his hand, take his gun
    live for visuals and knowledge won
    but remember the dealer and how he speaks
    while you suck on death and your mother weaps...


    ~EL

    went right through me. very powerful stanza.
  • BooskBoosk Posts: 29
    As always, terrific tone ... can feel it from the first line.

    And both paced very well, can feel it take you along through the imagery
    A little nonsense now and then, relished by the wisest men
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