Dirt under your nails...
AsPrivilegedAsAWhore
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I'll smother you before you reach the surface
and I'll rid you of your hands
before they unlock the cuffs
you say it wasnt planned
but like symphony your intentions stuck
your blue print for love is nothing but a guise
you cry like the rattle snake in endless pit demise
you sever heads to drop the leashes
and bury boxes in the sand
you sheild your ears from their speeches
you need the help but bite the hand
you curse me as if I were the gravel in your knee
embedded to reak havoc and endless misery
something something
make it fit
nothing nothing
let go of it...
~ Erin
and I'll rid you of your hands
before they unlock the cuffs
you say it wasnt planned
but like symphony your intentions stuck
your blue print for love is nothing but a guise
you cry like the rattle snake in endless pit demise
you sever heads to drop the leashes
and bury boxes in the sand
you sheild your ears from their speeches
you need the help but bite the hand
you curse me as if I were the gravel in your knee
embedded to reak havoc and endless misery
something something
make it fit
nothing nothing
let go of it...
~ Erin
They filled me full of drink
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame
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loved the first stanza - thought it captured the essence of the rest of your poem really well. nice flow, and your use of words was right on the ball.
top stuff erin