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Death Claps...

AsPrivilegedAsAWhoreAsPrivilegedAsAWhore Posts: 109
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It’s silent
Fatal
Whisper!
Be Still
See see what they’ve done
The heads!
The heads in their laps!
No no don’t point…
Don’t collapse
It’s fatal
Fatal
Time to be still
It’s silent
Cover your ears!
It’s coming
No!... it will blind you!
Cover your ears!
Ignore the laughs
Ignore the laughs
It’s silent
Ignore the claps
It’s fatal
… bring your feet over here
block the door
be still!
Don’t move!
Float
It’s fatal
You forgot the door
You lose
You die
It’s fatal
Muff your ears!
Cup your lap!
Its death
Death Claps…
They filled me full of drink
And led me round the rooms
Naked and cold and grinning
Until everything went black
And I came down spinning
I awoke so drunk and full of rage
That I could hardly speak
A fag in a whale bone corset
Draping his dick across my cheek
And its into the shame
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Comments

  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    This is good, you know. I'm hearing echoes of good writers, such as Conrad and Beckett, but I know this is yours! Keep posting!

    And I don't bullshit when I like something, you know.

    :)
  • Pearl Jam and toastPearl Jam and toast Posts: 4,475
    lol

    1/2 the stuff you write is weird and depressing and the other half is hilarious...and weird :)

    i likey erin :)
    Come on pilgrim you know he loves you..

    http://www.wishlistfoundation.org

    Oh my, they dropped the leash.



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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    The old English word "wyrd" means "fateful". It may be fate or providence that APAAW's poetry, however spontaneous she says it may be, goes further than all of our works here in exciting and disturbing readers' preconceptions towards a new way of look at things.

    I likey Erin's poetry too.

    :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    what was the word Black Sin used for 'destiny' an Arabic word that had some impact.....begins with m.....must look it up.....

    that was good APAAW......

    what an acronym.....A Poem about all Wyrd.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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