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Sometimes other peoples words fit your life better than your own

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
"you once talked to me about love
and you painted pictures of
a never neverland
and I could've gone to that place
but I didn't understand
I didn't understand
I didn't understand"
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Seattle, WA Posts: 12,223
    I agree, and sometimes the things we write don't fit our lives until much later. It's as if inspiration is premonition, if that doesn't sound too hippyish and loopy. :D
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by FinsburyParkCarrots
    I agree, and sometimes the things we write don't fit our lives until much later. It's as if inspiration is premonition, if that doesn't sound too hippyish and loopy. :D
    hey! what's wrong with hippyish and loopy??!! ;)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    shave off those sideburns ya hippie
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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