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paint spots drying on your countertop
you didn't bother to put that plastic down
you never were one to let the good times stop
picking grass out of your hair
before we get to your house
your dad is like Sherlock
he can tell what just went down
red marks on your knees
and bruises on your neck
grass stains on your back
and lipstick on your teeth
I remember like yesterday
the way you made me feel
the chills shoot down my spine
and my mind begins to reel
but now your hands are like icicles
and your lips like cigarettes
your eyes are dark and sad
and you look at me
...like we just met
your veins show signs
of what you've been doing since
your arms are purple
and your fingers cannot grip
tell your parents I'm sorry
for what I did
cause something's changed in you
and you're dying cause of it
you didn't bother to put that plastic down
you never were one to let the good times stop
picking grass out of your hair
before we get to your house
your dad is like Sherlock
he can tell what just went down
red marks on your knees
and bruises on your neck
grass stains on your back
and lipstick on your teeth
I remember like yesterday
the way you made me feel
the chills shoot down my spine
and my mind begins to reel
but now your hands are like icicles
and your lips like cigarettes
your eyes are dark and sad
and you look at me
...like we just met
your veins show signs
of what you've been doing since
your arms are purple
and your fingers cannot grip
tell your parents I'm sorry
for what I did
cause something's changed in you
and you're dying cause of it
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.
I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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icicles is a good one, great imagery you know, its better than like cold, and really makes you feel it
I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.