la poema en español

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
me desperté esta mañana
y vi por mi cuarto
Encontré mi amor botella
yo fui al servicio y me duché
pudé probar el huele en mi aliento
y me duelé mi cabeza

pero hoy es el mejor día de mi vida
porque he pensado en tú

caminé a clase
y tuve un examen
y no estudié nunca
y el profesor preguntó
"qué es la problema con tú?"
y no escuché en una palabra
me dije "Hoy es el mejor día de mi vida"
sí he pensado en ella

ok now in english it won't rhyme and the translation is loose

I woke up this morning
and looked throughout my room
I found my love my bottle

I went to the restroom and took a shower
I could taste the stink on my breath
and my head hurt

but today is the best day of my life,
because I've been thinking about you

I walked to class
and I had a test
and I didn't study at all
and the profesor asked me
"what is the problem with you"
and I didn't hear a word
I told him "today is the best day of my life"
yes I've been thinking about her

I know there are a lot of problems... but I tried
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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  • anOmisanOmis Posts: 223
    Hermoso!
    ~~dont mind yer make up, just make up yer mind~~

    ~~its better to be hated for who you are than be loved for who you are not~~

    F.ZAPPA
  • Espectaular! Es una poema muy sincera y romantica!
    This isn't the land of opportunity, it's the land of competition.
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    Un amor de la botella, aunque siempre mojara, es siempre frío.
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    damn!! I'll have to tell you how its done, you're butchering my languague... :D



    me desperté esta mañana
    y busqué por mi cuarto
    Encontré mi amor la botella
    fui al baño y me duché
    pudé probar el olor en mi aliento
    y me dolía la cabeza

    pero hoy es el mejor día de mi vida
    porque estuve pensando en ti

    caminé a clase
    y tuve un examen
    y no estudié para nada
    y el profesor preguntó
    "cual es tu problema?"
    y no escuché ni una palabra
    le dije "Hoy es el mejor día de mi vida"
    sí he pensado en ella
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    hey thanks!
    that helps a lot

    and make sure to read the disclaimer that I knew it wasn't perfect, but seriously thanks for editing it for me
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    hey thanks!
    that helps a lot

    and make sure to read the disclaimer that I knew it wasn't perfect, but seriously thanks for editing it for me

    I read the disclaimer don't worry
    and no problem about the translation, I enjoyed doing it
    :)
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
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