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are you right?

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
edited April 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
pieces of paper shuffle
under my feet
my floor is so dirty
and yours is so clean

but thats how it always goes

I do the right thing
but I'm still the asshole
you used to love it when I'd sing
a song for you to make you cry

but back then they were tears of joy
now all you do is cry

you dwell on things that can't be changed
if I could change them I would
but I can't
no
I can't

and every time you whisper
a single breath
telling them that I'm the worst person in the world,
I hear it
and I wonder if its true
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    aww man
    i hope u know its NOT true
    :)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    an ex is coming to town
    and her baggage is bad memories
    in a car thats merely selfishness
    and drama I can't escape from
    no matter how hard I try
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    an ex is coming to town
    and her baggage is bad memories
    in a car thats merely selfishness
    and drama I can't escape from
    no matter how hard I try

    why do u have to be part of that drama
    u dont have to escape it
    but can give urself permission not to face it
    or be around it......maybe u need to be more selfish
    ........by not accepting it..............
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    that made sense??
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    if anyone else had said it, it wouldnt have made sense

    wait
    did that make sense?
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    if anyone else had said it, it wouldnt have made sense

    wait
    did that make sense?
    yeah
    why not
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    why not
    yeah
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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