a short little something

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
my eyes are on fire
I haven't slept in days
but I'm still wired
the adrenaline won't fade

my eyes burn
from dust slicing through the wind
but what hurts my eyes the most
is that they'll never see you again
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    i'll hum a song for you. i feel like it.

    *hums*

    it's pretty, i promise.



    in absense of words i often hum. haha... i'm weird.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    heheh
    you're making me laugh today
    silly girl
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    heheh
    you're making me laugh today
    silly girl
    that's the point :)

    *does the happy dance*

    *sings*: " i made pat happy today! i made pat happy today!"

    :D
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    my eyes are on fire
    I haven't slept in days
    but I'm still wired
    the adrenaline won't fade

    my eyes burn
    from dust slicing through the wind
    but what hurts my eyes the most
    is that they'll never see you again
    I absolutely love this one. You're sooooo good!
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • onejourneyonejourney Posts: 285
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    my eyes are on fire
    I haven't slept in days
    but I'm still wired
    the adrenaline won't fade

    my eyes burn
    from dust slicing through the wind
    but what hurts my eyes the most
    is that they'll never see you again

    Thats great! Very sweet...:)

    (Yes, Im a guy and I just used the word sweet.:))
    "...just be glad you have the music and cherish it for yourself..." -stateoflove79
  • dude!
    ur very talented
    thank u soo much for always sharing so many creative thoughts with us
    u rock kid!!!
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • Originally posted by onejourney
    Thats great! Very sweet...:)

    (Yes, Im a guy and I just used the word sweet.:))
    awwww

    ur the best kind of guy there is

    and yes, hes a master in the sweet department
    check out the other stuff ;)
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • Originally posted by onejourney
    Thats great! Very sweet...:)

    (Yes, Im a guy and I just used the word sweet.:))
    Hell, I LOVE when guys use the word sweet. I think it's fucking adorable. :) And I'm not just saying that because I'm quite wasted right now. (If I've misspelled anything, that's the reason, not because I'm a bimbo.) I really do think that.
    There was a whole inside his soul a manicure couldn't fill. So he found himself a whore to love while daisies choked in the windowsill. *JK*
  • onejourneyonejourney Posts: 285
    Originally posted by rarghrargh-brownstar
    awwww

    ur the best kind of guy there is

    and yes, hes a master in the sweet department
    check out the other stuff ;)

    Originally posted by VedderGirl27

    Hell, I LOVE when guys use the word sweet. I think it's fucking adorable. And I'm not just saying that because I'm quite wasted right now. (If I've misspelled anything, that's the reason, not because I'm a bimbo.) I really do think that.


    Wow...maybe Ill start using that word more often....;)
    "...just be glad you have the music and cherish it for yourself..." -stateoflove79
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