sweet girl

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
blanketed feelings don't come to a halt
you just hide them and hide them
but it isn't your fault
you listen and listen for something thats true
but someday sweet girl, you'll find someone new

you're stuck in a place
and you'll never get out
I've seen that place too
but my height helped me out

but I have the reach to give you a hand
to pull you on up, and the pain turns to sand

this place I can show you,
where all your dreams become real
I promise you sweet girl,
finally you'll feel

happy again, here with me
looking down on the world
with all their problems and hate
we won't have any of it
yeah
it could be great :)
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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Comments

  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    bravo again, pat :)
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    you're stuck in a place
    and you'll never get out
    I've seen that place too
    but my height helped me out


    i really enjoyed the whole poem but for some reason which i can't explain, i really liked this part best.
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