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mine eyes seduce thee

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
edited July 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I still see a cold dark shadow
drifting over you
a lie says you are over this
but I don't think its true
and a little tired statue
knows exactly what you do

I was casual when I hurt you
I'm so sorry
I'm a monster
don't look at me
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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  • Traver DiDiminicoTraver DiDiminico Posts: 185
    relationships are never over
    If there was a chair in which I could comprehend, I would stand always and embrace the path
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    one thing i do know for certain..

    you are not a monster.

    monsters can't sing like angels...
    and monsters don't have souls that love.

    you're a being of beauty. who made a mistake.






    don't forget who you are.
    and don't think you're horrible.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

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  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    this was actually an old old old poem I wrote a couple years ago, that I stumbled upon, I reworked it and posted it, I really liked it, but it isn't exactly how I feel now :) (see other poem) :)
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    A monster can never write like that...
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • FancyFacadeFancyFacade Posts: 330
    you're a being of beauty. who made a mistake.

    yeah--i agree, beautiful..thank you for sharing--
  • Love objectiveLove objective Posts: 37
    That is a little riper of a poem. She was casual when she hert me, but despite the torment i could see her inner beauty. Love never fails. Peace.
  • PJGirl2004PJGirl2004 Posts: 58
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    I still see a cold dark shadow
    drifting over you
    a lie says you are over this
    but I don't think its true
    and a little tired statue
    knows exactly what you do

    I was casual when I hurt you
    I'm so sorry
    I'm a monster
    don't look at me


    I get this one for sure.
    It is something I wish someone in my life could say to me.
    Good one.
    Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    i wanna bring back some of the old poems that have left this part of the message board....its been down so long i figured some should be brought back


    ~~~the classic bump~~~
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    well thank you for bumping my poem. I had actually forgotten about writing this one :):)
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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