night revisited

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
there lying with you
there lying with you
my shirt collar pinned under you

so you took it off

and I lay there with you
we were both trying to choose
if the thought in our heads
was right or wrong

we had so much to lose

there lying with you
clothes now on the floor
but just lying with you
I warmed my body with you

and you took my hand
and softly spoke in my ear
and your lips were soft
with your belly under mine

but I had to leave you
cause its always
always
about
you
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    wooooooooo................
    :)
    wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    Originally posted by Amaterasu
    wooooooooo................
    :)
    wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    haha

    lol
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    holy hottness.. ;)

    hee hee

    but there's a tinge of something separate... something subtle... something.....


    mysterrrrrrrrrrrious.







    i call it beauty.
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    Originally posted by of_the_girl


    i call it beauty.

    thats funny, thats what I call you :)
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    thats funny, thats what I call you :)

    there you go again, bein' all smooooth ;)

    *watching out* :p
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    there lying with you
    clothes now on the floor
    but just lying with you
    I warmed my body with you

    I luv warm bodies.....bodies
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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