sappy little poem #8

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
having a good good night
its even better now
a little bird chirping to me sweetly
it sounds sort of like you
but not quite as good
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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Comments

  • FelicityFelicity Posts: 339
    it's always good for the soul.

    not sappy at all,k,quite perfect actually.
  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    pat yer pretty :)

    *hugs*
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • GREAT SIMPLE POEM......

    FROM SOMEONE FROM MONTANA,,,,THE EAST SIDE!!!
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
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