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island

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
a far off land that I will never know
an island of paradise
where innumerable flowers grow
a soft summer's breeze
moves sand to the sides
and nudges the leaves
that the little ants ride

the most beautiful island
I'll never know
the most beautiful island
is warm and is true
that beautiful island
is you
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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  • of_the_girlof_the_girl Posts: 745
    Originally posted by Kwyjibo
    a far off land that I will never know
    an island of paradise
    where innumerable flowers grow
    a soft summer's breeze
    moves sand to the sides
    and nudges the leaves
    that the little ants ride

    the most beautiful island
    I'll never know
    the most beautiful island
    is warm and is true
    that beautiful island
    is you

    YER a beautiful island!! :D

    ~*~*~

    but in all seriousness.... that was very loverly, as we call it. :) i wish i had more interesting comments. i guess i'm just dumbfounded by your talent. :p
    "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." --Plato

    www.myspace.com/birdinamitten
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    I'm gonna say good night to you here
    cause here has the yawning face *yawns

    thanks jess :D
    glad you like it
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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