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I'm Sorry That I Stabbed You in the Eye

KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
edited July 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Twisting.
More like pulling.
the persistent thumping of your head

I am so powerful.
Your wrists are so weak.
Tell me, is it dark in there?

Well, it's dark out here,
and the damn moon is shining
through the slits in the blinds.

don't forget what I told you.
you always seem to forget.
The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    forget what?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    I see the gray matter
    excreting from your spine
    as I watch the last traces
    disappear from your eyes.
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    that last gleam of hope
    or whatever
    I can't stand to look at you
    when you stare off into space.

    stop it already.
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • KwyjiboKwyjibo Posts: 662
    the fire...

    the fire.
    The most remarkable thing about you standing in the doorway, is that its you, and that you're standing in the doorway.

    I write down good reasons to freeze to death in my spiral ring notebook. But in the long tresses of your hair--I am a babbling brook.
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Posts: 570
    I wish I could say this was just really deep, but it seems a bit dimented until you give the reader more.
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