Wow dude..

OutshynedOutshyned Posts: 55
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'm getting ready to move and ran across my writing bag. . .
I think i actually like some of it lol!

I'll post some and try not to adjust anything sheesh!
Not sure who i wrote this first one about.
edit: Ok i did throw out a couple of stupid lines lol!

Woman of illusion (<- i guess that's the title? lol)

Woman of illusion
transformation is her thing

she wont bend to delusion

it's hard to get to know her
she's gentle, she's a dove

she's distrustful and suspicious
people snapping everywhere
overdriven, blood in the streets

depending on material falsehood
success is never what it seems
end

Blah! I'll be back if i find anything else mildly interesting :D

-Outs
"I guess it was the beatings... made me wise
But I'm not about to give thanks, or apologize"

The other day the above lyrics hit me like they never had before.......Almost dizzying....So true, feelings i long recognise summed up in words so beautifully/perfectly.....
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    so far....so good....:)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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