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Outshyned
Outshyned Posts: 55
edited July 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Umm i feel pretty inferior to some of you as far as my writing goes.. But here goes..... Something i just wrote today.

new and old
sincere in repose
absolution
goodness
involuntary submission

never forgetting
good and balanced things
think...refuse to react
then do

going beyond
slackened things and overworked slaves
so gradual
dominoes clicking
endlessly
infinite waves always their own way
"I guess it was the beatings... made me wise
But I'm not about to give thanks, or apologize"

The other day the above lyrics hit me like they never had before.......Almost dizzying....So true, feelings i long recognise summed up in words so beautifully/perfectly.....
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    Outshyned wrote:
    Umm i feel pretty inferior to some of you as far as my writing goes.. But here goes..... Something i just wrote today.

    new and old
    sincere in repose
    absolution
    goodness
    involuntary submission

    never forgetting
    good and balanced things
    think...refuse to react
    then do

    going beyond
    slackened things and overworked slaves
    so gradual
    dominoes clicking
    endlessly
    infinite waves always their own way

    Inferior, the term you used to place yourself with your writing is not true.
    Inferior just seems to be one of those words that ______________.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce

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