I've never done this before...

ColumbusDecanter
ColumbusDecanter Posts: 40
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I'd rather be here than anywhere else...

Look beyond and find a resting place...
Beyond the shades of anger laced with faith...

Younger than the infinite...
Older than the dead...
Pretending not to know,
I'm pretending not to notice...
The surface is the closest,
Forever losing focus...
I'm pretending not to notice...

Long ago and far away yesterday rings
Save the night and sleep the day, we'll live like kings...

There is no frame of limit, there is no shame of which to speak...
It's me up there on screen, the watchers glued upon their seats...

I'd rather be here than anywhere else.
Bleeting and babbling we fell on his neck with a scream... Wave upon wave of demented avengance march cheerfully out of obscurity into the dream
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  • california girl
    california girl Posts: 70
    Originally posted by ColumbusDecanter

    There is no frame of limit, there is no shame of which to speak...

    I'd rather be here than anywhere else.

    I absolutely adore this...
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Congratulations on losing your cherry! And with a remarkable offering! Welcome aboard, and I hope to see you around more in the near future!
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  • ColumbusDecanter
    ColumbusDecanter Posts: 40
    Sweet... I think I've just been praised by a couple of critics...


    I think I'll post a couple more, thanks for the support.
    Bleeting and babbling we fell on his neck with a scream... Wave upon wave of demented avengance march cheerfully out of obscurity into the dream
  • CranMalReign
    CranMalReign Posts: 1,928
    Originally posted by ColumbusDecanter
    Sweet... I think I've just been praised by a couple of critics...


    I think I'll post a couple more, thanks for the support.

    Yah, you'll find this forum a lot more supportive than pretty much any of the others on this board. It's gotten to the point where I almost post exclusively here.

    Anyway, have no fear! We are supportive, offer advice sometimes, and one of us will even rewrite your stuff for you if he feels so inclined ;).
    • 98 Pgh
    • 00 Pgh
    • 03 Pgh|Philly|PSU|Camden 1+2|Hershey
    • 04 Boston 1|Reading
    • 05 Philly
    • 06 Camden 1+2|Pgh
    • 08 Camden 1+2|Hartford|Mansfield 2
    • 09 Philly 1 [EV]|Toronto|Spectrum 1-4
    • 10 Cleveland|Buffalo
    • 11 Philly [EV]|PJ20
    • 12 Philly
    • 13 London|Pgh|Buff|Philly 1+2|Balt
    • 14 Cincy|StL
    • 16 Philly 1+2|Philly 2 [TotD]
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