Blatant... no deep thinking needed ;)

ColumbusDecanterColumbusDecanter Posts: 40
edited November 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When first you learn to yearn
And when you first divert the turns
And you forget to stir alert
One million tries but none for sure.
And when you wax so sturn and curt
Then I well chance to snatch your shirt
Atop the pain that never hurts
Between the lines our eyes will flirt.
Affections sunk so far below
With every itch but none can show
When morning enters stage with snow
I'll hide my face inside your clothes.
Beyond your aura glowing so
As not to grow from down below
Where seeds are planted sewn in bone
Where your fake smiles stand alone.
Imagine once inside a chance
To hear your feet across these steps
Along your rhythm I cant dance
While here you watch me so askance.
If solidly you took a stance
And lain me on the ground so frantically
Your fist so plumply lands
Across my jaw your knuckles plant.
I'll take a hint from down within
The bruise that rests upon my chin
It's not the wound that makes me cringe
But everything that's ever been.
And every mock along the fringe
Your every move made ever since
Reduced my eyes to vacant slits
The healing process now begins.
Bleeting and babbling we fell on his neck with a scream... Wave upon wave of demented avengance march cheerfully out of obscurity into the dream
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  • This is kind of a sequel to the last one...
    But I dunno if it's a sequel really, as much as it's just the "brother poem" of the last one... kinda like people sometimes say Ghost and Cropduster are brother songs.

    Anyway, here goes:



    Another scene plays out
    As just another turn-about
    While here I shout across the water
    All the things I just cant do without
    The frozen dinners twist inside
    And repetition fries my mind
    The hundredth time I'm still suprised
    A clue derived
    From both your blue-green sparkling eyes
    I dont have time
    The breadth and width are miles to climb
    I'm shameless standing open wide
    And falling far behind
    My eyes are shut, your profile turns me blind
    When heaven, sun, and earth diverge
    Let moon, so full and bright emerge
    When buildings fall
    Be, then, assured
    The sleeping giants come awake and then begin to stir
    Sudden as a gaping gasp
    So finite just as nothing lasts
    The clashing demi-gods re-hash
    A cliquing wisdom here
    Ascending from the buried heaps of recent past
    Imagine one day both your eyes and thoughts
    Might run across these lines
    These seas of faith in pushing tide
    The thoughts of crashing, ebbing, flowing
    Slides across my stolid eyes.
    Bleeting and babbling we fell on his neck with a scream... Wave upon wave of demented avengance march cheerfully out of obscurity into the dream
  • i can't resist.

    i can't...

    "the hundredth time i'm still surprised.."

    inspiring.
  • We shall swim.xo
  • I think you misread...
    This is not optomistic by any means...
    Bleeting and babbling we fell on his neck with a scream... Wave upon wave of demented avengance march cheerfully out of obscurity into the dream
  • +
  • Originally posted by ColumbusDecanter
    When first you learn to yearn
    And when you first divert the turns
    And you forget to stir alert
    One million tries but none for sure.
    And when you wax so sturn and curt
    Then I well chance to snatch your shirt
    Atop the pain that never hurts
    Between the lines our eyes will flirt.
    Affections sunk so far below
    With every itch but none can show
    When morning enters stage with snow
    I'll hide my face inside your clothes.
    Beyond your aura glowing so
    As not to grow from down below
    Where seeds are planted sewn in bone
    Where your fake smiles stand alone.
    Imagine once inside a chance
    To hear your feet across these steps
    Along your rhythm I cant dance
    While here you watch me so askance.
    If solidly you took a stance
    And lain me on the ground so frantically
    Your fist so plumply lands
    Across my jaw your knuckles plant.
    I'll take a hint from down within
    The bruise that rests upon my chin
    It's not the wound that makes me cringe
    But everything that's ever been.
    And every mock along the fringe
    Your every move made ever since
    Reduced my eyes to vacant slits
    The healing process now begins.


    i like...
    you say blatant
    and it is
    kinda like pushit, or whatever...
    heal on cd
    thank you :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • CD, been missing you 'round these here parts. We partied with the space people and then you just floated off into space---nice to see you! :) I liked the 1st installment and I can't believe the sequel even kicked!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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