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something i'm working on...

THCTHC Posts: 525
edited August 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
alright...bear w/ me...but i think i'm on to something BIG!!!!

here' what i got soo far...

Now that the party is jumping
With the bass kicked in, the Vegas are pumpin'
Quick to the point, to the point no faking
I'm cooking MCs like a pound of bacon
Burning them if they're not quick and nimble
I go crazy when I hear a cymbal
And a hi hat with a souped up tempo
I'm on a roll and it's time to go solo
Rollin' in my 5. 0
With my ragtop down so my hair can blow......


i think i'll need some more...but i LOVE it so far.....
could be my best work evah!
“Kept in a small bowl, the goldfish will remain small. With more space, the fish can grow double, triple, or quadruple its size.”
-Big Fish
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  • Spot In The SkySpot In The Sky Posts: 1,175
    bro- if your rhyme was a drug i BET you could see it by the gram
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  • THCTHC Posts: 525
    Originally posted by Spot In The Sky
    bro- if your rhyme was a drug i BET you could see it by the gram

    Word!

    :)
    “Kept in a small bowl, the goldfish will remain small. With more space, the fish can grow double, triple, or quadruple its size.”
    -Big Fish
  • suedesuede Posts: 247
    if you made this into a song, i bet it would've been HUGE in the mid 80's! :D
  • impulserimpulser Posts: 8
    Wow.... thats cool... as cool as ice... with a white creamy ice cream appeal too it!
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