My article on Yield and The Master and Margarita

likepilateihaveadog

I've put some work into this...was hoping all who were interested would take a look and give me some feedback on my ideas.
I know this is still rife with poor english and typos and all that...it's just the first draft.
This is one of my major interests, this book and the album...hopefully those that feel the same can add to this argument. Or disagree too!
Anyway, here's the link:
http://edisk.fandm.edu/william.montgomery/yield/
It's the PDF... the mp3's are for those who don't know the songs prior.
Thanks a bunch all,
keep on jamming
Will

likepilateihaveadog

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EvilToasterElf

It's well written from the first 8 or so pages I read through, but it's certainly not necessary to humble yourself at the beginning of the paper, you came up with this, be proud of it, tell us exactly what you're going to prove in your paper and then go to it.

likepilateihaveadog

EvilToasterElf wrote:

It's well written from the first 8 or so pages I read through, but it's certainly not necessary to humble yourself at the beginning of the paper, you came up with this, be proud of it, tell us exactly what you're going to prove in your paper and then go to it.

well, thanks. yeah, this is just the first draft...just trying to get the ideas down, have them make some sense...