Taller

likepilateihaveadog

Didn't seem possible
I could grow this fast
Didn't take long
But I hope it lasts

Parking pass and fancy shoes
Third floor view
I always kind of thought
This could only happen
To you

And what is it that I actually do?
Other than sit here
Writing
Thinking of you?

Moving the sun
And my feet here and there
Wondrin why you ain't here

Maybe that's the point
The object of this whole thing
I'm growin up, getting old
I need a new song to sing

Being Enlightened

This one made me smile. May there always be a song in your heart and a smile on your face, likepilateihaveadog!

ThorneHope

I liked this one. Reminded me of when my oldest son started calling me "mommy". Sent chills down my spine. That baby just called me "mom". I'm somebody's mom.... go figure. Then the part where you said you needed a new song... it reminded me of when my kids went to school and I had some time to think about me again. That's when I started writing again.
Good stuff!!
~ThorneHope

likepilateihaveadog

thanks much for the comments.

I kind of wrote this as a song-first approach for the first time...
when I get some time Saturday I'll have to record it and post it here.